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SaghaleyLewis

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i wasn't sure how to rate this because it could have been some artistic metaphor for existence or something but then i saw the earrape tag

did you not read that you cannot upload a song for a geometry dash level?

ivanelXD69 responds:

its a answer or an afirmation?

This aint half bad. A bit short but at least its mixed well. The sudden silence at the end was a bit strange but that is the only thing that i would change. Keep improving! ;)

wow you did pretty good with the mixing and the sampling and etc. the melody is a bit dissonant but that might be on purpose. overall well done i can tell that you put effort into this track and the extra time and care definitely shows. keep improving!

ofekdr85 responds:

Thank you so much! I will work more on my melodies tho.

nice track, nice and relaxing.

BahKooJ responds:

Thank you! Anything I can improve on?

stop re uploading songs to newgrounds it wont work it is explicitly said when you upload music. first of all you have to be scouted for songs to be used in gd, and secondly its not even the sped up version so it wont sync with the god damn level.

nice track, some room for improvement but good job so far :)

great job with this track! there is a lot of originality and uniqueness that really makes this song stand out from other music like this. a lot of new ideas that is so different and refreshing. the (kind of) randomness of the melody normally would make a song seem strange but it actually fits here. what you try to do in the song you do well. my only gripe with the name, it doesn't really match the mood of the song (but that's just my opinion). very well done!

this isn't too bad, although i do have minor nit-picks to help you improve. at 0:41 the 2nd lead that comes in is sort of off, if it was placed a bit sooner it would sound better but that is just my opinion. good job so far keep improving :)

ThisJustIn01 responds:

Thank you for the feedback and the vote, I appreciate it!

a bit repetitive, needs a bit of work. also the clap you used at the end doesn't really fit in my opinion. keep improving!

Saghaley @SaghaleyLewis

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